The educational system in Egypt(first draft)
Educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture of it's country. Look at the school system, and you will see the social structure and the values of it's culture. The educational system differ from country to another, for example in Egypt, the educational system reflects the socio-economical statues of it's own people.
Every educational system has it's advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, egyptian educational system is highly centralized and it is not only the largest one in the middle east, but also it is one of the largest educational systems in the world. We can see that there are alot of foreign students from many countries around the world to study in the egyptian univercities, like; Cairo univercity, Ain shams and El azhar univercity.
On the other hand, the educational system in Egypt has also many disadvantages, such as, the over crowded classsromes, most of the classes have more than 35 student, which create inappropriate environment for both teacher and student. Also the curriculum needs to be updated and the serious problem is that most of what we learn we don't apply it n our every day life or in our practical life.
Finally, I think that if we want to raise our country we should work on developing our education first.
so nince essay nora,it's a specific and clear purpose. your style is simple and understoodable.your sentences are varied in a length and structure. but there is spelling mistake *On one hand( on the one hand). i think your conclusion needs to be longer than this.as a whole your essay is very good.i like the picture you put so much, it's very funny.
ردحذفhii noor,i liked your essay.it is well organized. Its words and sentences are simple and not very long. I think you expressed your point of view in this topic clearly..nice work,keep it on
ردحذفO.K. Noor Go ahead and write the final draft
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