Egyptians and elections (first draft)
An election is a formal decision making process by which a population chooses an individual to hold public position. Elections have been the usual mechanism by which modern representative democracy operates since the 17th century. Elections concept differ from country to another especially between the developed and underdeveloped countries.
On one hand, elections in the developed countries, for example Britain and the United States of America, people know their rights and have the awareness of using it, so they keen to go to vote, although they may know that it is may be unfair and in spite of this they go to voting and some of them accompanied by his children to make them exercise their rights in the future.
On the other hand, in the third world countries, for example in Egypt, we notice that most of people don’t care about elections and they may don’t know what is the date of election or why it for. I saw once on TV an interview with some people on the street, asking them about elections and their opinion, I was shocked when I found that about 80% of people will not go to vote for people's assembly elections and they say that their votes have no use and elections anyway are unfair and also the government will choose what it want.
In my opinion, my vote is municipality and also my right so I must vote. And if everyone said that all elections are unfair and did nothing we will be as we are underdeveloped country and in this case we will not deserve freedom and have no right to ask for democracy. At the end I want to say to everyone if you want the change start by yourself.

your pictures are very interesting.your draft contains an organized introduction and clear conclusion. well done Nora.
ردحذفGood work Nora ,your introduction is interesting and your idea is clear.Best whises.
ردحذفHi Noor
ردحذفI liked your picture very much, but I couldnt read your draft as the background of your weblog is so black that I couldnt read your essay. Try to change the background to be able to read your draft.
I'm sorry Dr.Samah for this mistake
ردحذفHi Noraty
ردحذفGood work don`t worry the words are clear ,but don`t write on the Microsoft office again better for you . change the back ground.You wrote a very simple essay I like it .With a simple words. I love you my closest friend Oh sorry i mean my sister.
o.k. Noor, make your friends' comments and write the final draft
ردحذفI have no comments to you.