Essay on air pollution
The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of series concern, which increased in a terrible way in the last 10 years. Air pollution occurs when the air contains gases, dust, fumes or odor in harmful amounts. That is, amounts which could be harmful to the health. There are a numerous sources to air pollution problem in Egypt, as in other countries, However, the formation and levels of dust, small particles and soot are more characteristic in Egypt than presently found in industrialized countries. Some of the sources for these pollutants, such as industries, open-air waste burning and transportation, were also well known problems in most countries only 10 to 20 years ago, also the smog and mining operations.
The important sources for particulate matter are the windblown dust from the arid areas, suspended dust can be seen to be a major air pollution problem in Egypt. Other source of pollution is transportation which conceded in my opinion the most dangerous source especially in the big cities like Cairo and Alexandria where we can see the traffic jam.
Also Carbon dioxide, a greenhouse gas, is the main pollutant that is warming Earth. Though living things emit carbon dioxide when they breathe, carbon dioxide is widely considered to be a pollutant when associated with cars, planes, power plants, and other human activities that involve the burning of fossil fuels such as gasoline and natural gas. In the past 150 years, such activities have pumped enough carbon dioxide into the atmosphere to raise its levels higher than they have been for hundreds of thousands of years.
Because of the high technology of making machines, searching for petrol, metals or valuable stones.
All of these sources causes Smog hanging over cities which the most familiar and obvious form of air pollution. But there are different kinds of pollution—some visible, some invisible—that contribute to global warming. Generally any substance that people introduce into the atmosphere that has damaging effects on living things and the environment is considered air pollution. Besides the global warming also the air pollution affects badly on human health as it causes cancer and a lot of series diseases. Air pollution causes the erosion of ozone which leading to climate change and melting of ice.
The air pollution is a great dangerous for the whole world so governments are taking measures to limit emissions of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases and they did an agreement between countries that they will cut back on carbon dioxide emissions. And I suggest an idea which is to put taxes on carbon emissions or higher taxes on gasoline, so that people and companies will have greater incentives to conserve energy and pollute less.Finally the air pollution is a great problem that we should not underestimate this problem. The government should put strict penalties on polluting factories because human health is priceless
nour your easy is very good .you illustrated your point of view in a very good way, I wish we can do with this solutions . they can improve our air.
ردحذفA good essay, but I think it is borrowed from the internet. If you want to use the internet, you can read essays about the topic, but when you want to write your own essay, use your own words. So, iam looking forward to see your own essay not a copy of an internet essay. O.K.
ردحذفActually, I didnt find any mistakes to correct and I think by doing so we will lose the main objective of the course that is improving the writing performance and critical reading of you.
air pollution in Egypt is a matter of series concern (a serious problem), which increased in a terrible way in the last 10 years. Air pollution occurs when the air contains gases, dust, fumes or odor in harmful amounts. That is, amounts which could be harmful to the health. There are a numerous sources (of) air pollution problem in Egypt, as in other countries, However, the formation and levels of dust, small particles and "soot" (what does it mean) are more characteristic in Egypt than presently found in industrialized countries (I don’t understand this sentence, try to write it in a clear way). Some of the sources for these pollutants, such as industries, open-air waste burning and transportation, were also well known problems in most countries only 10 to 20 years ago, also the smog and mining operations.
ردحذفThe important sources for particulate matter are the windblown dust from the arid areas ((I don’t understand this sentence, try to write it in a clear way)., suspended dust can be seen to be a major (source of) air pollution problem in Egypt. Other (another) source of pollution is transportation which conceded (is considerd)in my opinion the most dangerous source especially in the big cities like Cairo and Alexandria where we can see the traffic jam.
Also Carbon dioxide, a greenhouse gas, is the main pollutant that is warming Earth(I don’t understand this sentence, try to write it in a clear way)., s. Though living things emit carbon dioxide when they breathe, carbon dioxide is widely considered to be a pollutant when associated with cars, planes, power plants, and other human activities that involve the burning of fossil fuels such as gasoline and natural gas. In the past 150 years, such activities have pumped enough carbon dioxide into the atmosphere to raise its levels higher than they have been for hundreds of thousands of years (this paragraph is very technical, omit it).
Because of the high technology of making machines, searching for petrol, metals or valuable stones.
All of these sources causes Smog hanging over cities which the most familiar and obvious form of air pollution. But there are different kinds of pollution—some visible, some invisible—that contribute to global warming. Generally any substance that people introduce into the atmosphere that has damaging effects on living things and the environment is considered air pollution. Besides the global warming, also the air pollution affects badly on human health as it causes cancer and a lot of series (serious) diseases. Air pollution causes the erosion (what is the meaning of this word, use an easier word) of ozone which leading to climate change and melting of ice.
The air pollution is a great dangerous for the whole world so governments are taking measures to limit emissions of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases and they did an agreement between countries that they will cut back on carbon dioxide emissions. And I suggest an idea which is to put taxes on carbon emissions or higher taxes on gasoline, so that people and companies will have greater incentives to conserve energy and pollute less.
Finally the air pollution is a great problem that we should not underestimate this problem. The government should put strict penalties on polluting factories that pollute the air because human health is priceless
Goog work Noor.Your essay has a clear purpose and a clear main idea .The introduction creates interest in the the topic .The essay maintains a consistent tone ,but there are some words that are not clear.Good luck
ردحذفHi nour,your easy have a clear purpose and a main idea . Each paragraph begin with a topic sentence. Some words are not clear and precise.There are some words spelled incorrectly. But your easy has a clear introduction ,a body and a definite conclusion. Good luck my favorite girl ,
ردحذفHi Nour . Your essay has a specific and clear purpose .Also you present the topic well as it has a clear main idea and a clear introduction .body and a definite conclusion. You've some spelling mistakes in addition to some vague words.
ردحذفGood Work No00or