The final draft

The educational system in Egypt

Educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture of it's country. Look at the school system, and you will see the social structure and the values of it's culture. The educational system differ from country to another, for example in Egypt, the educational system reflects the socio-economical statues of it's own people.

 

         Every educational system has it's advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, egyptian educational system is highly centralized and it is not only the largest one in the middle east, but also it is one of the largest educational systems in the world. We can see that there are alot of foreign students from many countries around the world to study in the egyptian univercities, like; Cairo univercity, Ain shams and El azhar univercity.

 

          On the other hand, the educational system in Egypt has also many disadvantages, such as, the over crowded  classsromes, most of the classes have more than 35 student, which create inappropriate environment for both teacher and student. Also the curriculum needs to be updated and the serious problem is that most of what we learn we don't apply it n our every day life or in our practical life.

 

         Finally, I think that if we want to raise our country we should work on developing our education first and make our children and our youth their rights and defend on it.

The final draft

The educational system in Egypt(first draft)

               Educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture of it's country. Look at the school system, and you will see the social structure and the values of it's culture. The educational system differ from country to another, for example in Egypt, the educational system reflects the socio-economical statues of it's own people.

 

         Every educational system has it's advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, egyptian educational system is highly centralized and it is not only the largest one in the middle east, but also it is one of the largest educational systems in the world. We can see that there are alot of foreign students from many countries around the world to study in the egyptian univercities, like; Cairo univercity, Ain shams and El azhar univercity.

 

          On the other hand, the educational system in Egypt has also many disadvantages, such as, the over crowded  classsromes, most of the classes have more than 35 student, which create inappropriate environment for both teacher and student. Also the curriculum needs to be updated and the serious problem is that most of what we learn we don't apply it n our every day life or in our practical life.

 

         Finally, I think that if we want to raise our country we should work on developing our education first.

 

 

the outline

The educational system in Egypt (outline)

Introduction:

      The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.

Body:-

     advantages:-

           - The egyptian educational system is a large one.

           - Education in Egypt is for free.

     disadvantages:-

          - Over crowded classromes.

          - Curriculum needs to be updated.

Conclusion:-

         - my opinion in this issue.

 

The final draft

Egyptians and elections

         

                An election is a formal decision making process by which a population chooses an individual to hold public position. Elections have been the usual mechanism by which modern representative democracy operates since the 17th century. Elections concept differ from country to another especially between the developed and underdeveloped countries.

              On one hand, elections in the developed countries, for example Britain and The United States of America, people know their rights and have the awareness of using it, so they keen to go to vote, although they may know that it is unfair and fabricated and in spite of this they go and vote and some of them accompanied by his or her children to make them exercise their right in the future.

             On the other hand, in the third world countries, for example in Egypt, we notice that most of people don't know what is the date of election or whay it for. I saw once on TV an interview with some people on the street, asking them about elections and their opinion, I was shocked when I found that about 80% of people will not go to vot for people assembly elections and they say that their votes have no use and elections anyway are unfair and also the government will choose what it want.

             In my opinion, my vote is municipality and also my right so I must vote. If everyone said that all elections are unfair and fabricated and did nothing, we will stay as we are now, underdeveloped country, and in this case we will not deserve any freedom and have no right to ask for democracy. At the end I want to say to everyone if you want the change start by yourself.