First Draft

First Draft

MY Dream Job Final draft

       Some of us know from th time we are very young what we want to do when we grow up, others still trying to figure that out. It's common that most of children if we asked them , what are you want to be in the future, they answer by being a doctor , so I was, I want lie about that, but after I grown up every thing has changed.

    Now my dream job has changed from being a doctor to be a tourist guide, that's for many reasons, first of all, this job has no routine as I'll make tours in many places around the world.also I can represent my country and I can be proud to share history, and the most interesting thing that I can earn free or discounted travel and see the world with others, I can meet alot of people from different walks of life, different culture and different nationalities.

    But to be a tourist guide , I must be qualified for this job so I must know many languages spcially English, because it is th most known languag in the world, to deal with tourists. Also I must have alot of information about every thing, and I see that a tour guide should two skill sets. The first one, they should be interested and knowledgeable about the things they are touring. They need to know details and be able to memorize facts about each thing or location.The second skill is that a tour duide should have engaging personality, should be fun, know interesting personal things about each place that might not be in the guide material.

    Finally, to be a tourist guide is an interesting job, it's amazing to meet new people from different cultures and different nationalities, that's whay this is my dream job. 

First Draft

My dream job First draf

       Some of us know from th time we are very young what we want to do when we grow up, others still trying to figure that out. It's common that most of children if we asked them , what are you want to be in the future, they answer by being a doctor , so I was, I want lie about that, but after I grown up every thing has changed.

    Now my dream job has changed from being a doctor to be a tourist guide, that's for many reasons, first of all, this job has no routine as I'll make tours in many places around the world.also I can represent my country and I can be proud to share history, and the most interesting thing that I can earn free or discounted travel and see the world with others, I can meet alot of people from different walks of life, different culture and different nationalities.

    But to be a tourist guide , I must be qualified for this job so I must know many languages spcially English, because it is th most known languag in the world, to deal with tourists. Also I must have alot of information about every thing, and I see that a tour guide should two skill sets. The first one, they should be interested and knowledgeable about the things they are touring. They need to know details and be able to memorize facts about each thing or location.The second skill is that a tour duide should have engaging personality, should be fun, know interesting personal things about each place that might not be in the guide material.

    Finally, to be a tourist guide is an interesting job, it's amazing to meet new people from different cultures and different nationalities, that's whay this is my dream job.  



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My Dream Job( outline )

Introduction:-

   Some of us know from the time we are very young what we want to do when we grow up, others still trying to figure that out.

Body:-

* My dream job.
* The advantages of being a tourist guide.
* How can I be a tourist guide.

Conclusion:-

  Finally, to be a tourist guide is an interesting job. Its amazing to meet new people from different cultures and different nationalities, in addition to having a lot of information.

The final draft

The educational system in Egypt

Educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture of it's country. Look at the school system, and you will see the social structure and the values of it's culture. The educational system differ from country to another, for example in Egypt, the educational system reflects the socio-economical statues of it's own people.

 

         Every educational system has it's advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, egyptian educational system is highly centralized and it is not only the largest one in the middle east, but also it is one of the largest educational systems in the world. We can see that there are alot of foreign students from many countries around the world to study in the egyptian univercities, like; Cairo univercity, Ain shams and El azhar univercity.

 

          On the other hand, the educational system in Egypt has also many disadvantages, such as, the over crowded  classsromes, most of the classes have more than 35 student, which create inappropriate environment for both teacher and student. Also the curriculum needs to be updated and the serious problem is that most of what we learn we don't apply it n our every day life or in our practical life.

 

         Finally, I think that if we want to raise our country we should work on developing our education first and make our children and our youth their rights and defend on it.

The final draft

The educational system in Egypt(first draft)

               Educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture of it's country. Look at the school system, and you will see the social structure and the values of it's culture. The educational system differ from country to another, for example in Egypt, the educational system reflects the socio-economical statues of it's own people.

 

         Every educational system has it's advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, egyptian educational system is highly centralized and it is not only the largest one in the middle east, but also it is one of the largest educational systems in the world. We can see that there are alot of foreign students from many countries around the world to study in the egyptian univercities, like; Cairo univercity, Ain shams and El azhar univercity.

 

          On the other hand, the educational system in Egypt has also many disadvantages, such as, the over crowded  classsromes, most of the classes have more than 35 student, which create inappropriate environment for both teacher and student. Also the curriculum needs to be updated and the serious problem is that most of what we learn we don't apply it n our every day life or in our practical life.

 

         Finally, I think that if we want to raise our country we should work on developing our education first.

 

 

the outline

The educational system in Egypt (outline)

Introduction:

      The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.

Body:-

     advantages:-

           - The egyptian educational system is a large one.

           - Education in Egypt is for free.

     disadvantages:-

          - Over crowded classromes.

          - Curriculum needs to be updated.

Conclusion:-

         - my opinion in this issue.

 

The final draft

Egyptians and elections

         

                An election is a formal decision making process by which a population chooses an individual to hold public position. Elections have been the usual mechanism by which modern representative democracy operates since the 17th century. Elections concept differ from country to another especially between the developed and underdeveloped countries.

              On one hand, elections in the developed countries, for example Britain and The United States of America, people know their rights and have the awareness of using it, so they keen to go to vote, although they may know that it is unfair and fabricated and in spite of this they go and vote and some of them accompanied by his or her children to make them exercise their right in the future.

             On the other hand, in the third world countries, for example in Egypt, we notice that most of people don't know what is the date of election or whay it for. I saw once on TV an interview with some people on the street, asking them about elections and their opinion, I was shocked when I found that about 80% of people will not go to vot for people assembly elections and they say that their votes have no use and elections anyway are unfair and also the government will choose what it want.

             In my opinion, my vote is municipality and also my right so I must vote. If everyone said that all elections are unfair and fabricated and did nothing, we will stay as we are now, underdeveloped country, and in this case we will not deserve any freedom and have no right to ask for democracy. At the end I want to say to everyone if you want the change start by yourself.

First Draft



Egyptians and elections (first draft)

              An election is a formal decision making process by which a population chooses an individual to hold public position. Elections have been the usual mechanism by which modern representative democracy operates since the 17^th century. Elections concept differ from country to another especially between the developed and underdeveloped countries.

              On one hand, elections in the developed countries, for example Britain and the United States of America, people know their rights and have the awareness of using it, so they keen to go to vote, although they may know that it is may be unfair and in spite of this they go to voting and some of them accompanied by his children to make them exercise their rights in the future.

            On the other hand, in the third world countries, for example in Egypt, we notice that most of people don’t care about elections and they may don’t know what is the date of election or why it for. I saw once on TV an interview with some people on the street, asking them about elections and their opinion, I was shocked when I found that about 80% of people will not go to vote for people's assembly elections and they say that their votes have no use and elections anyway are unfair and also the government will choose what it want.

               In my opinion, my vote is municipality and also my right so I must vote. And if everyone said that all elections are unfair and did nothing we will be as we are underdeveloped country and in this case we will not deserve freedom and have no right to ask for democracy. At the end I want to say to everyone if you want the change start by yourself.

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The Egyptians and The elections (outline)

vElections in the developed countries.

vElections in Egypt.

vWhy the Egyptians abstain from elections?

vMy opinion on this subject.

Air pollution -Final Draft-

         Air pollution  in Egypt is a serious problem, which increased in a terrible way in the last 10 years.Air pollutionoccurs when the air contains gases, dust, fumes or odor in harmful amounts. That is, amounts which could be harmful to the health.  There are  numerous sources of air pollution in Egypt,  However, the formation and levels of dust are more characteristic in Egypt than presently found in industrial countries . Some of the sources for these pollutants, such as industries, open-air waste burning and transportation, were also well known problems in most countries only 10 to 20 years ago, also the smog and mining operations.

       The important sources for this problem are the windblown dust from the arid areas suspended dust can be seen to be a major source air pollution  in Egypt. Another source of pollution is transportation which is considerd in my opinion the most dangerous source especially in the big cities like Cairo and Alexandria where we can see the traffic jam.

      Also carbon dioxied , is the main pollutant that is warming Earth. Though living things emit carbon dioxide when they breathe, carbon dioxide is widely considered to be a pollutant when associated with cars, planes, power plants, and other human activities that involve the burning of fossil fuels such as gasoline and natural gas. In the past 150 years, such activities have pumped enough carbon dioxide into the atmosphere to raise its levels higher than they have been for hundreds of thousands of years Because of the high technology of making machines, searching for petrol, metals or valuable stones.

     All of these sources causes Smog hanging over cities which the most familiar and obvious form of air pollution. But there are different kinds of pollution—some visible, some invisible—that contribute to global warming. Generally any substance that people introduce into the atmosphere that has damaging effects on living things and the environment is considered air pollution. Air pollution affects badly on human health as it causes cancer and a lot of serious diseases. Air pollution causes the harm of ozone which leading to climate change and melting of ice.

            Air pollution is a great dangerous for the whole world so governments are taking measures to limit emissions of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases and they did an agreement between countries that they will cut back on carbon dioxide emissions. And I suggest an idea which is to put taxes on carbon emissions or higher taxes on gasoline, so that people and companies will have greater incentives to conserve energy and pollute less.
                     Finally air pollution is a great problem that we should not underestimate . The government should put strict penalties on  factories that pollute the air because human health is priceless

 

Air pollution

Essay on air pollution

          The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of series concern, which increased in a terrible way in the last 10 years. Air pollution occurs when the air contains gases, dust, fumes or odor in harmful amounts. That is, amounts which could be harmful to the health.  There are a numerous sources to air pollution problem in Egypt, as in other countries, However, the formation and levels of dust, small particles and soot are more characteristic in Egypt than presently found in industrialized countries. Some of the sources for these pollutants, such as industries, open-air waste burning and transportation, were also well known problems in most countries only 10 to 20 years ago, also the smog and mining operations.

       The important sources for particulate matter are the windblown dust from the arid areas, suspended dust can be seen to be a major air pollution problem in Egypt. Other source of pollution is transportation which conceded in my opinion the most dangerous source especially in the big cities like Cairo and Alexandria where we can see the traffic jam.

      Also Carbon dioxide, a greenhouse gas, is the main pollutant that is warming Earth. Though living things emit carbon dioxide when they breathe, carbon dioxide is widely considered to be a pollutant when associated with cars, planes, power plants, and other human activities that involve the burning of fossil fuels such as gasoline and natural gas. In the past 150 years, such activities have pumped enough carbon dioxide into the atmosphere to raise its levels higher than they have been for hundreds of thousands of years.

Because of the high technology of making machines, searching for petrol, metals or valuable stones.

     All of these sources causes Smog hanging over cities which the most familiar and obvious form of air pollution. But there are different kinds of pollution—some visible, some invisible—that contribute to global warming. Generally any substance that people introduce into the atmosphere that has damaging effects on living things and the environment is considered air pollution. Besides the global warming also the air pollution affects badly on human health as it causes cancer and a lot of series diseases. Air pollution causes the erosion of ozone which leading to climate change and melting of ice.

            The air pollution is a great dangerous for the whole world so governments are taking measures to limit emissions of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases and they did an agreement between countries that they will cut back on carbon dioxide emissions. And I suggest an idea which is to put taxes on carbon emissions or higher taxes on gasoline, so that people and companies will have greater incentives to conserve energy and pollute less.
          
          Finally the air pollution is a great problem that we should not underestimate this problem. The government should put strict penalties on polluting factories because human health is priceless

out line

Out lining

Introduction:-

What is meant by air pollution and how is it in Egypt

Causes:-

·      Factories

·      Transportation

·      Smog

·      Mining operation

·      Burning wastes in wrong places

Effects:-

·      Health

·      Ozone deputation

·      Global worming

·      Climate change

Solution:-

·      Minimizing the use of fossil fuels

·      Reduce the transportation

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