First Draft

First Draft

MY Dream Job Final draft

       Some of us know from th time we are very young what we want to do when we grow up, others still trying to figure that out. It's common that most of children if we asked them , what are you want to be in the future, they answer by being a doctor , so I was, I want lie about that, but after I grown up every thing has changed.

    Now my dream job has changed from being a doctor to be a tourist guide, that's for many reasons, first of all, this job has no routine as I'll make tours in many places around the world.also I can represent my country and I can be proud to share history, and the most interesting thing that I can earn free or discounted travel and see the world with others, I can meet alot of people from different walks of life, different culture and different nationalities.

    But to be a tourist guide , I must be qualified for this job so I must know many languages spcially English, because it is th most known languag in the world, to deal with tourists. Also I must have alot of information about every thing, and I see that a tour guide should two skill sets. The first one, they should be interested and knowledgeable about the things they are touring. They need to know details and be able to memorize facts about each thing or location.The second skill is that a tour duide should have engaging personality, should be fun, know interesting personal things about each place that might not be in the guide material.

    Finally, to be a tourist guide is an interesting job, it's amazing to meet new people from different cultures and different nationalities, that's whay this is my dream job. 

First Draft

My dream job First draf

       Some of us know from th time we are very young what we want to do when we grow up, others still trying to figure that out. It's common that most of children if we asked them , what are you want to be in the future, they answer by being a doctor , so I was, I want lie about that, but after I grown up every thing has changed.

    Now my dream job has changed from being a doctor to be a tourist guide, that's for many reasons, first of all, this job has no routine as I'll make tours in many places around the world.also I can represent my country and I can be proud to share history, and the most interesting thing that I can earn free or discounted travel and see the world with others, I can meet alot of people from different walks of life, different culture and different nationalities.

    But to be a tourist guide , I must be qualified for this job so I must know many languages spcially English, because it is th most known languag in the world, to deal with tourists. Also I must have alot of information about every thing, and I see that a tour guide should two skill sets. The first one, they should be interested and knowledgeable about the things they are touring. They need to know details and be able to memorize facts about each thing or location.The second skill is that a tour duide should have engaging personality, should be fun, know interesting personal things about each place that might not be in the guide material.

    Finally, to be a tourist guide is an interesting job, it's amazing to meet new people from different cultures and different nationalities, that's whay this is my dream job.  



outline

My Dream Job( outline )

Introduction:-

   Some of us know from the time we are very young what we want to do when we grow up, others still trying to figure that out.

Body:-

* My dream job.
* The advantages of being a tourist guide.
* How can I be a tourist guide.

Conclusion:-

  Finally, to be a tourist guide is an interesting job. Its amazing to meet new people from different cultures and different nationalities, in addition to having a lot of information.

The final draft

The educational system in Egypt

Educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture of it's country. Look at the school system, and you will see the social structure and the values of it's culture. The educational system differ from country to another, for example in Egypt, the educational system reflects the socio-economical statues of it's own people.

 

         Every educational system has it's advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, egyptian educational system is highly centralized and it is not only the largest one in the middle east, but also it is one of the largest educational systems in the world. We can see that there are alot of foreign students from many countries around the world to study in the egyptian univercities, like; Cairo univercity, Ain shams and El azhar univercity.

 

          On the other hand, the educational system in Egypt has also many disadvantages, such as, the over crowded  classsromes, most of the classes have more than 35 student, which create inappropriate environment for both teacher and student. Also the curriculum needs to be updated and the serious problem is that most of what we learn we don't apply it n our every day life or in our practical life.

 

         Finally, I think that if we want to raise our country we should work on developing our education first and make our children and our youth their rights and defend on it.

The final draft

The educational system in Egypt(first draft)

               Educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture of it's country. Look at the school system, and you will see the social structure and the values of it's culture. The educational system differ from country to another, for example in Egypt, the educational system reflects the socio-economical statues of it's own people.

 

         Every educational system has it's advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, egyptian educational system is highly centralized and it is not only the largest one in the middle east, but also it is one of the largest educational systems in the world. We can see that there are alot of foreign students from many countries around the world to study in the egyptian univercities, like; Cairo univercity, Ain shams and El azhar univercity.

 

          On the other hand, the educational system in Egypt has also many disadvantages, such as, the over crowded  classsromes, most of the classes have more than 35 student, which create inappropriate environment for both teacher and student. Also the curriculum needs to be updated and the serious problem is that most of what we learn we don't apply it n our every day life or in our practical life.

 

         Finally, I think that if we want to raise our country we should work on developing our education first.

 

 

the outline

The educational system in Egypt (outline)

Introduction:

      The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.

Body:-

     advantages:-

           - The egyptian educational system is a large one.

           - Education in Egypt is for free.

     disadvantages:-

          - Over crowded classromes.

          - Curriculum needs to be updated.

Conclusion:-

         - my opinion in this issue.